Goldenfrost (MCA) - Withdrawn Edit

Stormwing's poor Gary-Stu mate whose personality I have horribly butchered with my Flanderization...comments? --Sparrowsong 01:21, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and before anyone asks about the herbs, they're supposed to be tansy and tansy is golden, so...yeah. That's why the herbs are golden. --Sparrowsong 01:22, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Highlights and ear pink need to be blended. And should we have a tutorial or something for new users? --Rainwhisker09 01:49, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? And I don't think we need a tutorial quite yet. Let's see what other people think, though...Echo? Bella Cullen 01:54, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I still think it should be blended more. But that's just my opinion. --Rainwhisker09 01:59, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Well, the shading doesn't really make sense... no offence, but you can highlight the parts of him that respond to the sun more, like the front and the leg. :) Eveningswift :) 11:52, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Evening, highlights aren't actually necessary; many cats that don't have highlights have been approved before. I think this looks awesome, Sparrow, just thicken and blend the shading, especially on the herbs. Rainwhisker, I don't think that we really need a tutorial; if a new user doesn't know how to make an eye, put shading, etc., a more experienced user could just make a diagram. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:25, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

-nods- but the shading here looks irregular: I can't tell what's supposed to be in shadow, and what's not. I mean, the spine of him is shaded, then it's highlighted. I know a lot of people do that, but we have to do different things... right? No? But he looks too bland and flat...Eveningswift :) 19:11, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I'm sorry, I just don't like this image very much. Eveningswift: it's perfectly fine to have a highlight on the back. Bella Cullen 22:49, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I never said that it wasn't. This is why we have this page: to make improvements. If you don't want comments or constructive critism, then I advise you to not put things on this page. Eveningswift :) 00:00, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Creamflower (Q) - Declined Edit

The first image up for approval! WOOT! I hope it's ok that I put this up. Anyway, I did Creamflower because I thought her story was really tragic. Comments? --Sparrowsong 03:50, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

WOW! Nice job, Sparrow! Maybe thicken and blend the shading a bit.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:35, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Great, Sparrow! What Echo said, and maybe the eyes can have their pupils kind of dilated and looking at the person on the computer screen? She looks kind of crosseyed like that. But you don't have to; not all cats pose. And maybe her ear could be more pale. Cats' ears are either pale pinkish-gray, or just rosy dark gray. :) Some have even black or white ears. But when a cat's ear is colored, the whole of the ear is, not just the center. And I'm the one to say! LOL. (Hypocrite, I am) Eveningswift :) 19:57, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, most people make queens' eyes like that; I think she can keep it that way. Also, ear pink is usually just the color that Sparrow has - kind of salmon-pinkish, and it doesn't usually fill up the whole ear.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 23:47, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

OK. I've just been studying live cats too much. :) But isn't realistic things what we want? Even if it doesn't look like a cartoon? Eveningswift :) 00:11, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

And maybe thicken the shading more, and maybe a little highlights. That's the only flaw I can make out. :) And the paws can be lighter... :D Eveningswift :) 00:19, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 00:36, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Yay! -claps- But you can blur it just a teensy bit. :) Eveningswift :) 00:37, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Bella Cullen 00:44, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

She looks awesome! Comments before approval in 24 hours? (yay, I've always wanted to say that!)-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:51, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wait! (Am I allowed to post yet?) The transition from the white tail-tip to the rest of it should be blended more. (Sorry Echo, I ruined your moment of glory lol) --Rainwhisker09 01:44, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Bella Cullen 01:48, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Lol Rainwhisker, no moment of glory for me. >.< Much better, Sparrow. Now any comments before approval?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:27, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

The top's more shaded that the bottom... but we don't really need to go into that much detail, right? Eveningswift :) 19:12, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

  • shrugs* Now is Echo's moment of glory. --Rainwhisker09 21:18, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. *Takes a deep breath* Comments before approval? -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 21:28, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading a little more. It's also too dark. HAWKFIRE98 22:48, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

You could lighten it with the dodge tool and blend it. --Rainwhisker09 18:02, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

No moment of glory yet! ^^ --PandasongPanda-Love 00:51, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Peacesong, please comment when leaving a message here. And her shading is irregular, and looks bumpy. :) Eveningswift :) 21:38, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in over a week. Decline in 24 hours?  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 23:20, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

This is such a beautiful image, I really don't want it to be declined. :( But, Hawkey, you're right - it hasn't been worked on in about 10 days, so... -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 01:09, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to the lack of work.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 21:49, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Logo - Withdrawn Edit

File:Pialogo.png Ok, I admit, I was bored and felt like making a logo. Fairly simple, but if everyone likes it, you could use it for the userbox thing that Echo made on here. Just an idea. I put the for approval thing as a joke. --Rainwhisker09 02:01, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like it. But could you add claws? Right now it looks like a dog footprint. Also, maybe make it a little smaller. Great job, though! Bella Cullen 02:21, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

You can color it. Like a ginger one or just a black one with highlights.. :) Eveningswift :) 11:53, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Definitely add claws and make it smaller. Evening, what exactly did you mean by "color it?" It's a footprint, not a cat's actual foot. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:32, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I know, but it'll be more interesting, wouldn't it? :3 And when cats leave prints, they don't walk with claws. But still, claw'll be interesting, too. Eveningswift :) 19:10, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Um... to make it more interesting, the PIA sign can be white when it is in the paw, but black when it is in the white. As... the PIA is black and white and see-able. OR... NVM. Eveningswift :) 20:13, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

For some unknown reason, I feel like it would look good if the whole paw was light grayish-blue... it would look pretty, you know? And maybe the letters "PIA" in navy blue? Just my opinion :P -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 20:24, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, these art things are so cool, especially Squea's. Squea, you're the BEST! And that's Levi and Isaac's opinion, too. Brineminnow is cool 20:38, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, Echo's thinking of the WWikia thing, and I totally agree. It's so prettyfulll...... Eveningswift :)

Thanks everyone! I'm probably going to change the paw completely, and just use one of the blank's paws for it and enlarge it on GIMP. OK, I need claws, color the paw, and the PIA sign is colored navy blue. I'm on it! --Rainwhisker09 21:13, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like it! HAWKFIRE98 22:44, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Hawkey! I changed it to a blank. I colored it blue gray. I also added a white paw and tail-tip. How does it look? --Rainwhisker09 20:56, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome! Wow, it looks like Brineminnow. :-| Very good, though! I love it! Eveningswift :) 00:25, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! (not a lot of users on WWiki say my charart's good, except for Hawkey, and a couple others.) I just used Dawn's male short-haired to-be blank, and flipped it. Comments? --Rainwhisker09 00:46, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm.... *thoughtful* the PIA sign can be a tad darker, and you can maybe add a background if you like, but it'll make the logo too crowded... I think that that's all I can say that doesn't go into too much work for you and detail, plus calling out of disagreements. Eveningswift :) 00:59, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How does it look? I didn't add a background, but I darkened the letters so you can see it better. --Rainwhisker09 18:00, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

That's great, Rain. X3 Nothing else to add; bare in mind that this is just supposed to be a logo, not to complex... so... :3 Eveningswift :) 00:24, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Any other comments? --Rainwhisker09 16:02, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

This looks awesome. Comments before approval? (Once it's approved, I'll archive it and make the userbox, OK?) -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:45, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

I am so sorry but I just dont like this logo. It's not you Blackclaw your one of the best image makers on here. It's just this blank doesnt look appropriate for a logo that is gonna be on here for a long time. Please don't tak offense, really really really please please please please please please dont take offense. Mossflight 01:26, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's ok, Mossflight. It's no problem. So which blank would you prefer to have on here? Unless you would rather have me redo it? --Hallow's Eve09 13:31, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Wait wait, logos are supposed to be on Talk: Warriors Characters Wikia not here. Plus I agree with Moss, sorry, and I liked the paw print better. HAWKFIRE98 22:14, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

It's alright, Hawkey. But this is the logo for PIA, and it should go on the PIA talk page. Besides, the Talk:Warriors Characters Wikia is for improving the wiki itself. Do you want me to change it back to the paw print? --Hallow's Eve09 12:44, October 14, 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing. --Hallow's Eve09 02:25, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Peacesong (Q) - Withdrawn Edit

File:Peacesong.queen.pngPeacesong's queen version. Constructments? Sparrowsong 21:53, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

There's a bunch of blurred lineart on the charart, and the shading needs to be blurred more. --Hallow's Eve09 22:03, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the shading, it doesn't look too 3-D from here. But nice :) Plus, i thought that Peacesong had a green and blue eye Brineminnow is cool 22:26, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Rainwhisker: I'll work on the shading ASAP, but I don't see the blurred lineart. Could you circle it for me?

Brineminnow: Thank you. And are you sure? Her description just said blue eyes... Sparrowsong 16:11, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

You're right, Sparrow, both of her eyes are blue. Brineminnow, please read the character in question's talk page before posting a comment like that. As for the pic, I echo Brineminnow about the shading, but I don't see any of the blurred lineart that Rainwhisker mentioned; I'm not sure there is any. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 21:15, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the shading. Sparrowsong 21:27, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

She's almost ready. Just thicken the shading on the haunch a bit. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 18:07, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Arrgh... I made a diagram for you, but my com deleted it by accident... I've got to do it again. --Hallow's Eve09 21:58, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Here is the diagram: Peacesongblurredlineart Red is blurred lineart, and blue are small sections that are blurred but it can be approved even if you don't change it. --Hallow's Eve09 16:03, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

I don't have any power to decline/approve this, but it's been 9 days. Please work on this. --Hallow's Eve09 00:31, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I've been extremely busy. I'll try to hurry up. Sparrowsong 18:24, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Eh, I don't really want to work on this anymore. Withdrawing. Sparrowsong 02:03, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Loner Blanks- Declined Edit

LonerMLong LonerFLong LonerFShort LonerMShort I made these for the PIA. They're big, but their not too big. About the same size as the leader blanks.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 22:06, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

They look very nice, Hawkey, but these blanks are your 3rd thing up for approval on this page. We haven't decided yet how many images one user can have up for approval at a time, but let's just stick to 2 images up per user for now, OK? :) -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 22:16, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, I fixed up Rainpaw. Maybe we can approve him real fast. I really don't wanna take these down and start over again. But orders are orders.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 22:19, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Ok. These look great, and they are a bit big, but they're good otherwise. Here's what you need to change:

  • The line on the top of the back of the left ear needs to be turned the other way. If you don't know what I mean, I can give you a diagram.
  • The right eye needs to be visible. Cats' eyes aren't on the sides of their heads.
  • On the longhairs, they look like they're sitting on their tails. Move the tails up a bit so they're covering their paws. --Hallow's Eve09 17:42, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 20:40, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see the changes... try uploading it again. --Hallow's Eve09 20:34, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Now? On my computer, the changes show on here very clearly. I worked on the eyes, long-hairs tails, and pointing the ears.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 21:48, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... I think something's wrong with my computer. I can't see the reuploaded images. --Hallow's Eve09 22:02, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

No, it's not just your computer, Rain; I can't see the changes either. Are you sure you uploaded them the right way, Hawkey? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 23:55, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, Hawk, I just realized something. The other Wiki recently approved Mosswhisker's loner blanks and it looks like we're probably just going to use their blanks. But these are very good. Perhaps they could be a fanon rank or something? Could you see them as RogueClan cat blanks or something? BTW, RogueClan is this Clan from one of my stories that I'm about to introduce. They are sort of like BloodClan. Sparrowsong 21:43, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah. Maybe we could use these as a specific clan's blanks or something. --Hallow's Eve09 22:03, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah good idea.. how about... your RougeClan blanks. That will be fine too.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 15:36, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, guys, but I don't think that we should have RogueClan blanks. For one thing, it wouldn't be fair that RogueClan cats get blanks, while other peoples' Clans don't have their own specific blanks. Everyone would want blanks for their own specific Clan, and that could potentially cause problems. For another thing, if we made one RogueClan cat blank, we'd have to make different blanks for queens, kits, the leader, etc., and that would take a lot of time. So how about the RogueClan cats can just be made with rogue blanks? It would save a lot of time and effort. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 12:47, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

Are you sure? RogueClan is different from other Clans - they're sort of like rogues and Clan cats at the same time, but I guess. What will we use these for? Sparrowsong 14:19, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

Well, they could be sharpclaw blanks, but we don't have any sharpclaw characters. --Hallow's Eve09 02:20, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkey, I really don't think that we have any use for these blanks. Sorry :(. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 18:45, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

WAIT! I know what we could use these for! How about the StarClan blanks idea? Or maybe Place of No Stars blanks? :) Sparrowsong 18:26, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, we'd have to make every cat that lives in StarClan or the Place of No Stars a blank. Don't get me wrong, it is a good idea. However, we need to make every position a blank. For example, kits that live in StarClan need a StarClan Kit blank. Plus, we'd need warrior ones, elders, leaders, med cats, queens (though we could count them as warriors as they were warriors once, right?), med cat apprentices, apprentices, loners, rogues, etc. (not counting kittypets cause they don't believe in StarClan). It would be a lot of work. I personally liked Evening's idea of putting stars on the actual chararts as we don't need to recolor the blanks. But... it's not my decision. --Rainwhisker09 18:43, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Take these down. They have no use. *sighs* HawkfireTalk! 18:55, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Hawkfire :(. Sparrowsong 20:55, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Frostsong- Withdrawn Edit


Here's Frostsong! Comments anyone?--AutumnSky 00:52, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Very good for your first charcat! I love it. Although, the eye is a bit strange. Add a black pixel in the left corner of her eye and we'll see how that goes :). Also thicken the shading and make the ear less pink an more natural (you can look at some other approved warriors for some help :D). Overall, great image!--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 02:16, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thats good but change the ear pick and thicken the shadine but good.--Pebbleshine 06:58, November 24, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Looks good, but the eye is creeping me out. Try adding some black pixels. HawkfireTalk! 14:38, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

And the lineart at the head is tainted white. You can use the pencil tool to blacken that, or use the paint. By the tail, there's this blurred bit. FaithlarkTalk :) 18:38, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Tainted? I think you mean "painted", Faithlark? Autumn (is it ok if I call you that?), Blur all the highlights and make the ear pink more reddish. Looks great for your first charart! --Rainwhisker09 20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant tinted. :) As in when you have a window tinted green, so it looks green. The lineart has white iin it, so.... FaithlarkTalk :) 23:21, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

There is also some blurred lineart below the ear. Fix that, and she'll be alright ^^--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 15:12, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

I don't have time for it right now, I have to withdraw her. --AutumnSky 23:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Archiving. --Rainwhisker09 21:31, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sunpaw - Declined Edit

Jordan u requested ginger tabby This is Sunpaw, my very first tabby. Do you like him? (He's a minor character in Falling Apart) 4 the 4est! 19:55, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome!!! Just darken the shading a little more.HiddensunTalk 20:40, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that good? 4 the 4est! 21:16, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Fix the eye by putting in a black and white pixel in it. Plus, blur the white patch on his chest to make it blended in more. Darken the shading, too, and that's all a see :). Nicely done.--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 17:53, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Um... the blank is a she-cat and the character is a tom. HawkfireTalk! 00:47, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, seriously? *looks closer* DRAT! Okay, big mistake there. But it took forever, and I love those tabby markings... *sniffle* Maybe... Sunpaw is suddenly a she-cat. Yay! Problem solved! Okay, I'll fix what Brightsparrow told me to do, and I'll reupload it. 4 the 4est! 02:44, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I stink at shading, did I make her worse? 4 the 4est! 02:53, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Not bad for your first tabby. The only things that bother me are the shading (a bit too light) and the stripes (need blending - they look scratchy, like they were drawn on with a pencil crayon), and the eye (look at Mudpaw to see how apprentices' eyes are done). Other than that, she looks pretty good. Sparrowsong 19:49, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I echo sparrow. Use the burn tool for shading (if you have pixlr) and look at other apprentices for the eye. it should give you a good idea on how to do this. Other than that, he looks good :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 01:38, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Blur this much more, but it's awesome. :) -Faithlark

Umm... is this cat looking up too, because I can see not much pupil. FaithlarkTalk :) 21:39, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Forestpaw, it's been nearly a month since this was worked on. Please work on it within 24 hours or it will be declined. Sparrowsong 05:52, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the haunch, 'cuz it's really pixelish. --Rainwhisker09 23:24, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

It's been almost a month and a half. Work on this please. --Rainwhisker09 00:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Feel free to resubmit once you have made the necessary changes. ChelseaFC 01:55, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Runningwind - Withdrawn Edit

Runningwindyeah -- ☆Pebble☆ X3 21:23, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

...OMG, that looks exactly like this stray cat in my neighbourhood. Seriously, it's SCARY. LOL sorry, nice job. Just blur the ear pink more and maybe darken it and he'll be good to go. Sparrowsong 17:39, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Shrink the ear pink a little bit, and it should be ready. --Hallow's Eve09 00:12, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

I Echo everyone else. Excellent job!--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 01:56, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 03:44, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is on top of the ear; it should be in the center. Also, it needs to be grayish or dark pink (look at other black cats, like Nightcloud and Hollyleaf). Nice job, otherwise. Sparrowsong 21:23, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Also, there's a bit of blurred lineart below the left hind leg. Fix that, and what Sparrow said, and I'd be glad to approve him. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 18:36, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Woah o.O Yeah, I echo Echo. LOL! But this is sooooo awesome! The fur is all.... fur-like and everything :D Faithlark 17:18, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

wow man it looks awesome. and it also looks like a cat in my neigbeehood. But I have like maybe 30 stray cats in my neighborhood. any way it looks awesome! =) --Darkmoon25 15:19, November 9, 2009 (UT C)

reuploaded-- Pebble2Pineow> sho retarded 00:25, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

His leg is blurred and the pink of his ear is tainted gray. Thats all, though. FaithlarkTalk :) 22:08, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

I echo faith, just do that and he'll be good to go :D--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 02:13, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

didn't I withdraw this? cuz I don't think I'll work on this -- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I think there was some mix-up. I'll archive it now. --Happy New Year!09 14:28, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wolfclaw (W) - Withdrawing Edit

File:Wolfclaw.png While I'm waiting for Willowbranch to get approved, I've posted Wolfclaw. Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker09 01:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading onto the midriff and the hind leg. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:27, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Umm... I may be sounding stupid, but what's a midriff? --Rainwhisker09 00:20, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

It's not stupid, don't worry, I didn't know at first either and I felt stupid when asking it. :) The midriff is shading on the top of the hind leg, look at Bluefur's deputy image of Ratscar for examples. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:19, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I"m withdrawing Wolfclaw. I don't have the time to work on this. When I do have time to work on him, I'll re-post. --Snowfall09 15:24, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenstripes (W)- Temporarily Declined Edit

Goldenstripes :3-- Pebble2Pineow> sho retarded 00:44, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good, the only thing i see is the ear needs to be a little more pink.HiddensunTalk 02:00, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Great image! There's just some blurred line art on the leg and back. Fix that, and that'll probably be it :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 01:35, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can tell that you used the smudge tool, no? :) Well, the lineart is a bit blurred on the edges. :) FaithlarkTalk :) 22:07, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

can this be withdrawn? I'm not going to work on this so...uh...yah-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:43, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Archiving. --Snowfall09 15:28, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfire (Q)- Declined Edit

Hawkfire.queen This is the last image I'm posting until next week. I'm going to Chicago. Comments? HAWKFIRE98 02:05, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice, Hawky! You just need to have shading and blur on the white ( you choose how) and the eyes are just too basic... Maybe different shades of green can be used. :) Eveningswift :) 02:58, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Eveningswift (again) lol. Also, can you make the tabby stripes more uneven? Right now, they're all practically the same shape and size. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:16, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

LOL, X3 Eveningswift :) 19:42, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

The eye is perfectly fine. And the stripes, that's just how Hawkfire's stripes are, and there IS shading. HAWKFIRE98 23:55, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well, the shading on the underbelly hardly can be seen. You can thicken it. The eyes are fine, but still, like I said, they're bland, but can pass that way. Just saying. Eveningswift :) 00:43, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

What I do with a charart that needs a white paw or something, I use the burn tool and set it to 9. (This is on Pixlr if you're confused.) Then I run it over the white spots until it looks like a light light gray. But that's just what I do. --Rainwhisker09 00:50, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Um... you can blur her stripes, but I don't know if she's supposed to have stripes to stand out like that, or if you already did. :-\ Eveningswift :) 11:49, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry I am still in Chicago and cant' get to my computer at all. Please excuse my absence and don't decline this please. -Hawkfire98 (Can't use siggy either! :-/)

Reuploaded. I've blended the stripes the best I could, and fixed the eye.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 22:44, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Nice! I don't think that we need to go into that much detail, so... comments before approval in 24 hours? Eveningswift :) 23:32, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the white parts a bit more, especially around the muzzle and neck areas. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 17:38, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Shade the underbelly like Evening said above. --Hallow's Eve09 17:44, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

I tried but it looked weird.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 15:36, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Umm... try smudging the orange fur down towards the belly. Right now it looks weird. --Hallow's Eve09 01:34, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

This one hasn't been worked on in several days either, and I really don't want it to be declined. Please work on this soon. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 18:38, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 18:45, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Better. But try stretching the stripes down more, just so it reaches the end of the orange part. --Rainwhisker09 18:51, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Rainy, plus, try an make the pink in the ear stand out more. Since it's a torn one, it's hard to see. And....that's it--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:46, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this has been worked on a lot, hasn't it? :) The tail's shading is a bit irregular, you can blur that, and I echo the others. :D that's all, to not for perfection, though. :) Nice pic! Faithlark 17:29, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. HawkfireTalk! 18:47, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Add stripes on the tail, then shewill be ready. Sparrowsong 21:52, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Woah this image is so awesome o.O Faithlark 22:36, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I hate to be kind of mean-like, but try not to post comments like that, as it has no relevance to giving criticism to the image. Hawkey, just do what Echo Sparrow said, plus blur the white tail-tip a bit more and it should be ready. --Rainwhisker09 03:16, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry about that; I was practically asleep on my paws when I wrote that. I think I was looking at Echo's sig at the moment, and I got mixed up. Sorry Hawkey, do what Sparrow said above and my previous comment on your charart. --Rainwhisker09 03:18, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Sure. Her tail needs to be blurred more. FaithlarkTalk :) 22:12, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Im sorry Hawkfire, but this hasn't been worked on iin over a month. I'm going to have to decline it. ChelseaFC 01:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Rockclaw (W)- For ApprovalEdit


Sorry, I accidently saved it as a JPG instead of a PNG but I figured it was okay for now. So what do you think? Comments, suggestions? SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 21:56, October 15 2009 (UTC)

looks like Jayfeather-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 23:45, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Spottedhead, but this is clearly made off of Dawnfeather's image of Mintfur. The only difference is the green eye color. Please fix the stripes so that it looks less like Mintfur or this will have to be declined. :( -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:27, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

OMG I'm SOOOOOO sorry, I just found it on my computer from a while ago in my CharCat folder and I thought I made it so I thought it looked like Rockclaw. Sorry! I'll make a complete new one. Sorry!!!!!! SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 17:54, October 16 2009 (UTC)

Okay I fixed everything and sorry again for the misunderstanding. Yeesh I stink at tabbies. SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 18:15, October 16 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur it and blur the tabby stripes alot more! --PandasongPanda-Love 21:35, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good for your first tabby, Spottedhead! I see only a few things: The tabby marks should be blurred, so that they look more natural and more subtle. The ear pink should be a dark reddish-pink color, and it should be larger, triangular-shaped, and blurred. The eye needs a pupil; see some of the approved images for how to make warriors' eyes. 4) The shading needs to be thickened and blurred - if you're not sure how to do it, I could make you a diagram. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 21:38, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

I love the stripes, Spottedhead! :) You can just blur it and shade, though. :) Eveningswift :) 21:39, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is great for your first tabby! :D Just blur the tabby marks a bit more! --Fogbreeze 21:56, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah so I redid him but not completely. I darkened the shadings, added a better pupil (because my old one was terrible), changed the ear color and blurred a lot of things. Too much? Let me know. Thanks for your comments! SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 01:05, October 18 2009 (UTC)

This looks pretty good, though the only thing that really pops out at me is that the lineart is blurred too much, nothing else really pops out but I'm going to look for more things anyway! XD --Fogbreeze 01:07, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

this is pretty good for your first tabby, maybe blur the stripes even more, and zoom in to fill in the lineart where the stripes ave covered it154.20.143.115 15:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)(Bracken- not signed in)

I'm going to echo Fogbreeze: the lineart is blurred too much. But I have no idea how to fix it. --Hallow's Eve09 20:35, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Blackclaw and Fogbreeze. Also, try to make some of the tabby stripes less straight, like the ones at the head. So make it less blurred (i believe you do the opposite....sharpen!)and blur only the stripes. Other than that, it looks good!--BrightsparrowFly Fly Away 19:54, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any other comments? Echomist? Hawkfire? SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 16:19, October 31 2009 (UTC)

The lineart is kind of lumpy and thick in some places, and over-blurred in other places. Also, the ear pink is kind of lopsided - just shrink it a little bit so that it's more inside the ear. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 18:42, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Echo (no pun intended), and the lineart is too thick near the base of the tail and on the tail itself. --Hallow's Eve09 00:32, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded No pun needed Blackclaw but thanks anyway! Okay, anything else? SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 16:30, November 1 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be blurred more, and umm... I think that's it. --Rainwhisker09 18:20, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart's still uneven in places; some parts are too thin, some parts too thick. If you fix that, and tidy up the ear pink a bit so that it's not hanging out the side of the ear, I'd be glad to approve this. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 23:29, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Plus he needs an article. --Rainwhisker09 13:31, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried my best with the lineart but I fixed the ear and redid some lineart around the back, chest and tail area. SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 20:17, November 2 2009 (UTC)

One more thing: the part where the chest connects with the foreleg closest to us isn't... connected. I hope that made sense. --Rainwhisker09 21:47, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know what you mean Rain and thanks! SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 17:14, November 3 2009 (UTC)

There is still some line art covered by the stripes, like on the leg. That's really the only thing that caught my eye. Just fix that :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 17:48, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

...are you sure you uploaded the right version? It looks the same. --Rainwhisker09 03:12, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Actually yes, now that rain mentioned it, i don't really see a change. Sorry, but the stripes like the ones near the head still look straighter than normal. Sorry I didn't notice that before :P. --♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 02:46, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whoops maybe I didn't but this one's different, I made sure of that :D SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 14:06, November 11 2009 (UTC)

Yep, this one is a better version :D. Let's you need to blur the ear and thicken the shading to about a 9 in size. You've worked hard on this :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 19:06, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Nice, Spottedhead! But there's the shading by his paw that is not blurred. And maybe you can thicken the shading a bit. FaithlarkTalk :) 22:10, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 16:19, November 27 2009 (UTC)

The shading is still kind of thin for a warrior, just thicken it a bit more, not darken but thicken it. Like a brush size of nine, with the burn tool. Do that, and that'll probably be all :D--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 02:37, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Brighteh! SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 22:45, December 12 2009 (UTC)

Uh I was just wondering if this was okay or if this needs work because no one's repsonding so.... SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 17:45, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I would scroll down the page and miss this sometimes, and with the holidays and everything, haven't been able to comment on everything. Blur all of the shading a lot. Also, the eye neds fixed, you can look at my tutorial on warriors wiki for how to fix the eye. --Icy-chan 00:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'll echo what Icethroat said above. --Snowfall09 15:27, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know if the shading's too much but I can always fix it. Let me know! ♪ Spottedhead ♫ 22:13, January 17 2010 (UTC)

The back is very dark and the front of Rockclaw is a lighter shading. So either lighten the shading on the back or darken the shading on the legs, haunch, and so on :). Plus, the eye still needs to be fixed --♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 03:08, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed the shading and I wasn't sure what you meant for the eye Brighteh sorry so anything else? SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 23:29, January 24 2010 (UTC)

Oh, so you still need help on the eye. Well, pick the color eye you want. Out of the left corner, put in a black pixel (about a one in size)and then using a while pixel, put it somewhere on the black pixel, but a little off. Try looking at other approved images for help on placement :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 23:45, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add shading to the head, too :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 20:08, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:05, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Deerpaw (A) for approval Edit

File:Deerpaw.8.png Deerpaw's apprentice version redone, comments?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 21:55, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome, Brighteh. :) The only thing that I see is that the ear pink should be blurred a bit more. Oh, also, the lineart of the eye looks a bit strange. Could you change it so that it looks like the eye lineart for normal apprentice she-cats? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 23:33, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, and blur the shading too. It's pretty great otherwise. Sparrowsong 01:36, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Brighty it looks great! I echo Sparrow and I also think the patches are too sharp at some points. Do you know what I mean? I don't know, maybe I'm crazy =D SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 20:05, November 2 2009 (UTC)

I'm echoing everyone above, plus the brown on the fore paw needs to be blended. --Rainwhisker09 22:02, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading, I can't see it. HawkfireTalk! 23:44, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded OK. Anything else?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:39, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I still think that the ear pink should be a little more blurred... it just doesn't look natural to me. 4 the 4est! 19:45, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedThanks Forest, more comments?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 18:09, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

I think you got it! 4 the 4est! 19:26, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

The eye lineart is still a bit strange... try looking at an female apprentice blank while you fix the lineart so that you can make it look the same. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 20:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK. Sorry i haven't worked on this in a while, I'll get started--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 01:42, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I stink at the lashes. Is it at least a bit better?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 01:47, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Blur it by the head and the leg. :) FaithlarkTalk :) 21:36, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded More comments?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 02:09, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink look more pink. --Rainwhisker09 20:53, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded OK, better? More comments?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 21:04, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Looks pretty okay to me. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Sparrowsong 01:17, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The black lineart pixels by the top of her head are very thin, and on her tail, too. :) Evening 00:09, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded better?--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 22:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 16:44, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Only that the shading looks a little uneven but you would never have been able to tell unless you really look at it. SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 18:00, January 1 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, more comments?--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 03:08, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Looks pretty good to me! ♪ Spottedhead ♫ 22:16, January 17 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:05, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardspots(W)- For Approval Edit

File:Leopardspots.png Wow! I didn't know that Leopardspots was Hawkey's character as well. o.O Coincidence! I just liked his name and decided to do him. I won't talk so much in the future, I promise. :) Comments? --Faithlark 16:55, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like him. Just blur the shading and maybe brighten his color a little more? It looks brown, not golden. HawkfireTalk! 18:47, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs thickened some. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 19:11, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing, Faith! I echo Hawk and Ice, plus you need to blur the spots and ear pink. Then he'll be perfect. Sparrowsong 19:40, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, on second thought, I don't agree with Hawkfire on the color. I think it looks golden enough. But I guess we should see what the other senior warriors think. Sparrowsong 19:50, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I know I'm not a senior warrior, but I think that it's golden enough. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:13, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Faithlark, but you have to wait until your first image is approved before posting a second image. I'm going to temporarily decline this until Hawkfire gets approved. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 20:51, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK, Echomist. :) Faithlark 22:31, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Changed For Approval to Temporarily Declined. --Rainwhisker09 03:09, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

The ear is a little too pointy at some edges, if you just smooth it out, it looks pretty good to me! ♪ Spottedhead ♫ 22:18, January 17 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lizardkit (Ki) - Approved Edit

LizardkitThe spunky, adventurous, rambunctious little kit from Half...comments? Sparrowsong 19:39, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

She's sooo cute!!could you just make the pink in the ear darker?HiddensunTalk 19:41, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sunny! I darkened the pink a few shades (I see what you mean; it did blend in with the gold a bit too much before). Is it better now? Sparrowsong 19:46, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

So cute! :D Just darken the shading and it'll be good to go. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 21:35, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Woah, she's got to be the best charart I've ever done!! Sparrowsong 21:39, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! She's looking at me mischeviously... nice effect! :D I echo Hiddensun, and maybe you can blur the white of her chest a bit more. Faithlark 22:34, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? LOL, that suits her soo well. Sparrowsong 22:43, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is an awesome charart, Sparrow! Just stretch the ear pink down more so it looks like a triangle. --Rainwhisker09 03:10, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

And maybe some shading on her dark paws, but that's all. Wow, this is GREAT :D FaithlarkTalk :) 23:17, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really do anything, but Sparrowsong, it's almost been a month since you've worked on this. --Rainwhisker09 23:25, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Oops, I'll work on Lizardkit and Cloudstorm as soon as I can. Sparrowsong 03:07, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 01:22, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I still don't see much shading on her paws. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Actually this is pretty good. Comments before Approval in 24 hr? ChelseaFC 01:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

It's been a couple of hours...WetstarTaylor Swift! 22:27, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

If I can say this, it's officially Approved. SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 20:19, January 26 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudstorm (W) - For Approval Edit

File:Cloudstorm.pngI made a warrior version of Cloudstorm because I just love her. How does she look? Sparrowsong 19:57, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened and blurred. HawkfireTalk! 20:40, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Which version is better? Sparrowsong 20:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like the second one. As for the image (both of them) the shading needs to be blurred, but that's about it :) . Nice job! --EchomistTalk/Contribs 20:53, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 21:43, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome image, Sparrowsong! :) Well, you can maybe put another layer of shading, though. :) Wow, I do so many smileys o.O Faithlark 22:32, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Good job! --Rainwhisker09 03:11, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

She's amazing! just thinken the shading on the tail more.HiddensunTalk 15:00, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Same thing that I said in the section above. It has been nearly a month. Please work on this! --Rainwhisker09 23:26, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 01:25, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, but you can thicken the shading and the tail more, and blur the shading of the head. Evening 00:07, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

I Echo everyone else, Excellent job :)--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 16:07, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. ChelseaFC 01:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

This image hasn't been worked on in over 3 weeks. Please work on this! ♪ Spottedhead ♫ 22:33, January 17 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sunnykit - For Approval Edit

SunnykitI've never actually seen a ginger cat with blue eyes. It seems to be a very rare phenomenon, for some reason. There's a ton of ginger cats that have green eyes, and a ton of them that have amber or yellow eyes, but no blue. Strange, isn't it? Lol, anyway, comments? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 01:44, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fantastic! I think some of the lineart on the paws was slightly blurred, but just by a couple of lines of gray out of the lineart. The lineart itself looks fine, though. In other words, just get rid of the gray lines outside of the lineart on the paws, and then it should be good to go. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:47, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great! I agree with Icy and maybe you can blur the ears a bit more. Doesn't look that natural. Just do that, and she'll be fine ^^--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 01:51, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

It looks beautiful! All I see is that the ear pink should be more... pink instead of dark greenish purple. --Rainwhisker09 02:52, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Rain and Icy though I think some parts might look unnatural in the luster category. Awesome job though! SpottedheadThe Shadows Are Rising! 21:55, November 12 2009 (UTC)

I love her. But all ginger cats are tabbies, so you should probably add stripes. Maybe lighten her eyes, too. Otherwise, she looks great. Sparrowsong 19:12, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Not necesarily, I had a cat (Cookie!!!!) who was pure ginger. But maybe it was because her stripes were so faint.... :P I don't know. I can research it. :D FaithlarkTalk :) 23:10, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Urrgh, sorry about my recent inactivity on here. I'm insanely busy right now, but I'll try to work on this when I have the time. It would be appreciated if you don't decline it, but if I haven't touched this for more than another week, feel free to. :) --EchomistTalk/Contribs 13:33, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

OK, the thing about having to have stripes is not true. You can have solid ginger cats in certain breeds. FaithlarkTalk :) 23:40, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and the ear is more of a maroon :P. Totally awesome, though. FaithlarkTalk :) 23:42, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Made the changes that were mentioned. Any more comments? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 13:51, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Her ear-pinkness is hard to tell. Experimenting time! FaithlarkTalk :) 22:50, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, sorry I haven't been that active on here. I'll work on this as soon as I can find time. Please don't decline. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 13:44, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The ear color blends in with the fur color. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

This image hasn't been worked on in almost 2 months! Please work on this! ♪ Spottedhead ♫ 22:36, January 17 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:03, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Poppywhisker (W) - For Approval Edit

Poppywhisker So this is my first Pic on here. What do you people think?--Pebbleshine 06:38, November 14, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Awesome! Just blend the shading some more. And for the eye, look at Silverstream's warrior pixel on Warriors Wiki. Sparrowsong 16:51, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! Just blur the shading more and the ear pink. --Rainwhisker09 21:00, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

And don't put the image next to your comment every time, because the changes automatically show in the first image. --Rainwhisker09 21:34, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry! I'm new with this stuff!--Pebbleshine 03:05, November 16, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Thicken the shading (by putting the opacity to a 20 or something) and blur. Totally awesome, though! :D FaithlarkTalk :) 21:37, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedAny more comments??--Pebbleshine 08:07, December 2, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

The shading needs to be lightened a bit. And the eye still needs work. Sparrowsong 23:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any more?--Pebbleshine 12:55, December 7, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Ear pink is a little too bright. Besides that, you'll be good to go! ( or at least I think!) --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Well I tryed to make it darker but it looked weird but i will keep it like that though.--Pebbleshine 18:38, December 10, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Reuploded. Any more??--Pebbleshine 05:04, December 12, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Umm...If you people pass this image can you tell me how to improve it or like put it in the 24 hour stage cause its been up for ages!!!! It's Pebbleshine!!! He he he!!! 15:39, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval in 24 hours? SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 20:21, January 26 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:03, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Leafburn (Q) - Approved Edit

File:Leafburn.queen.png *shuffles paws* My first queen. How bad is it? --Icy-chan 19:19, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Not bad at all! Just a couple of things: The ear pink should be a more pinkish color, rather than purple, the shading needs to be blurred, and the highlight is way too big in the left eye. Good job! --Rainwhisker09 20:48, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope this is better, because pixlr won't blur it anymore. It's blurred to the max. --Icy-chan 21:33, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Great charcat! Her stomach can be blurred more with the shading. What do you mean by "blurred to the max" because is that possible? Technically when the art is saved, it becomes a "new picture" and there is no history of blurring, and the blurred picture is "new picture", so the blurred, new picture can be blurred more...

nevermind that, it's confusing.... :P But basically when you save the picture you can blur it more... or are you saying that when you blur there seems to be no difference on what it looks like? FaithlarkTalk :) 23:29, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blurred to the max means that when you try to blur it nothing happens. Trust me, I've tried and tried again, but for this image, the shading is blurred to the max. --Icy-chan 01:40, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Try using the smudge tool. FaithlarkTalk :) 02:15, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

I tried the smudge tool, it didn't work either. --Icy-chan 04:14, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm.... I guess that it looks fine, then. But you can shade the paws, and it'll be ready to go, I think! :) FaithlarkTalk :) 17:03, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Icy-chan 19:08, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Comments???? --Icy-chan 01:27, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Er... put more shades of green in the eyes. --Rainwhisker09 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Do what Blackclaw sayd and you'll be good to go!! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Uhh...there's three shades of green already... --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:38, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Ok then never mind. --Rainwhisker09 00:22, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments beofre Approval? ChelseaFC 01:57, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

It's been three days and this hasn't been approved. --Rainwhisker09 16:11, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

*sigh* They'll get to it eventually... --Icy-chan 03:48, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Once the holidays are over, and schedules clear up. (That comment above sounded rather rude alone, but I didn't mean for it to sound that way, so I had to fix that.) :( --Icy-chan 03:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Not to be pushy or anything, but um...can this be approved now please? It's been a month, I don't think anyone else has any comments. --Icy-chan 23:29, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Changed From For Approval to Approved. SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 20:23, January 26 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:02, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Silverfox(D) - For Approval Edit


I rp as this character alot so I decided to do her charart. Comments?Hidden-jimgle ♪ 19:49, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I love it! But I really don't see any eye color on there. By the way, why is she called Silverfox if she's orange? I was jst wondering. It just seemed weird to me, that's all. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

She's called silverfox because she has silver eyes, and fox because of her ginger pelt.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:31, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good. All I see is the fact that all ginger cats are tabbies. If you like the image the way it is, though, you could just add faint stripes. Some cats even have 'ghost stripes,' where the tabby markings are lighter than the base pelt; those are about as subtle as it can get. Sparrowsong 05:50, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Sparrow, if you saw Faith's post for SUnnykit, she researched and found that you can have solid orange cats in certain breeds, so it's not absolutely necessary. As for the image, maybe darken the shading on the white part of the might be my computer, which makes everything lighter, but that's really the only thing that catches me eye� :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 14:29, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-added shading to the tail.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 16:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

She looks great! Just add faint tabby stripes, and blur the highlights on the shoulder and haunch some more. Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 21:53, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the area where the white tail-tip meets the ginger part, do what everyone else said above, blur the highlights, and it'll be good to go. Great job! --Rainwhisker09 23:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Again, it has been over two weeks since this was worked on. --Rainwhisker09 00:52, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I blured her to the maximum. Do I really have to make tabby stripes? I do'n' really want her to look like she has tabby stripes.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 16:40, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Nope, it's fine. Just look at my Quickpaw image, ginger without any stripes. Besides, if it's your character, and you don't want tabby stripes on your ginger cat, then you don't put any tabby stripes on it.� :) I don't see anything wrong with it. (It feels so weird having to wait for someone else to put it on 24 hours, I've gotten too used to being a s.w. on normal warriors wiki). --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:36, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I reuploaded her again...I didn't really liek that much the orange colour so I made her darker. Aand thanks.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 16:03, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:02, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Marshpaw (A) -- For Approval Edit

File:Marshpaw.png Here's my first on here!! This is Marshpaw. You can see him in Cats of the Wild on Fanfiction. So, Comments or Concerns? --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Pretty good, but the black patches should be slightly off-black so that we can see the lineart. Sparrowsong 02:40, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Good Honeyrose! But you might need to smuge the black spots and you need to thicken the shading. But that's very good for your first thing on here.Do you do this on WW?--Pebbleshine 03:04, December 7, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

I Echo the others and blur the ear more as well� :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 03:07, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- I did everything you guye said. I changed the black to more of a grayesh color and redid the shading.And, Pebble, it's harder on there 'cause there are lots more people on there 1st of all and I recently did a ginger and white. It took forever for me just to get the shding right. Argggg. Anyway, it's FINALLY in the 24-hour stage. Oh, yeah!! Anymore comment now that I'm starting to get back on topic� :)?? --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Beautiful. Comments before approval? Sparrowsong 01:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is a bit to big for the ear but don't listen to me cause I'm not as exspearance as everybody else--Pebbleshine 15:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

Actually, I do echo Pebbleshine. just take off a little of the ear pink and it'll be good to go ^^--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 21:49, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Fixed the ear!! K, is it ready for the 24 hour stage now? --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

By where the tail meets the end of his haunches, it's blurred. You can fix that, and it'll be ready to go.� :) Evening

I don't see it. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

I don't see it too evening are you should its just the computer cause that happen to me when i was fixing the ear pink on my cat and it looked blue!!--Pebbleshine 04:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)--Merry Christmas!!From Pebbleshine!

I see it actually. If you want, I can make a diagram--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 22:36, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

That would e helpful. Thanks. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Here, it's where I circled. Also, get rid of the dark spot underneath the leg and fill in the shading in haunches as well.

File:Apprentice short male.diagramm.png --♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 16:21, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think i fixed it now. Better? Anything else besides that?? --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Darken ear-pink and this should be good to go.� :) --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:24, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Hey, I'm sorry I haven't been active on here but to make it up, I fixed Marshpaw's ear pink. I think that's it. Anymore comments??

--RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Some of the spots are too sharpened so just fix that and the eye and you should be okay. SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 22:49, January 24 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:01, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Rockfall (W) - For Approval Edit

Rockfall Here he is! My first Charart on this wiki! Rockfall, Icestorm's little mate. Comments? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:45, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and smuge it and also make the the ear pink more of a pink colour.--Pebbleshine 07:12, December 11, 2009 (UTC)User:Pebbleshine

The lineart is a little smudged, so fix that� :)--♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:24, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

How? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:45, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Icestorm, just make the ear pink less of a red. i like it!! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Oh, for how to undo the blurred lineart, I use the sharpen tool to a 3 in size and just go over it. It usually works for me ^^. Sorry about the confusion--<span style="font-family:Times New Roman; color;blue; background:lavender; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:blue;">♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 15:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

What is the "hardness tool"? --PandastormPanda Love 22:50, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I think Brightsparrow is talking about the sharpen tool, it's a triangle shape next to the blur tool. (I think.) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:30, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, exactly what Ice said� :)--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 21:08, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Also, blur the ear� :)--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 21:26, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Whole image re-done. Any more comments? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:23, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading, I can't see it too well� :)--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 21:46, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any more comments? --IcyLet's Go 2010! 01:50, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? I really need this approved. WetstarTaylor Swift! 22:28, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear is a little too redish for a cat ear and the shading is too dark in some spots and too light in others so just even it out and you should be good! SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 22:48, January 22 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:01, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight Edit

Swallowflight My first one for this. What do you all think? Evening 21:16, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good! *winks at Evening* Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:05, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

That's amazing!! I cant do that!!!--Pebbleshine 03:40, December 15, 2009 (UTC)Merry Christmas 'From Pebbleshine!

Lol Hawkey! But I'd like to keep undercover... if that's possible, it's too obvious. Oops. Anyway, it doesn't really matter about the, um, cover thing. lol! XD Thanks guys! So, what should I do now? Evening 21:55, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Wait for it to get aproved??� :P--Merry Christmas From Pebbleshine!! 03:00, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink color more like the ear pink color of Rippetail. Otherwise, this is awesome! --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:26, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yes I agree with Icy. But this is amazing! *stares at this all day* Great job, Evening! --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:05, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 16:45, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:00, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Rivertail (W) - For Approval Edit

File:Rivertail.png I know I didn't reserve her first, but I don't think anyone else reserved her. Criticism is welcome. --Rainwhisker09 01:13, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I love the color, but the shading needs to be blurred a lot, and it looks dull. Could you add some highlights? Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 15:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear a bit more and add shading to the front of the you get what I'm saying? lol--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 16:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink brighter and blur the shading more.--Merry Christmas From Pebbleshine!! 16:21, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Better? I think I went a little overboard on the highlights. It's really bright now. --Rainwhisker09 00:27, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Blur the neck shading a little bit more, though, and make it so that all of the neck shading is the some color. --Icy-chan 23:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't get what you mean by some color. Did you mean same color? --Snowfall09 15:23, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops. Yeah, sorry. I hate typos... --Icy-chan 23:31, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:00, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lilystripe (R) - For Approval Edit

File:Lilystripe.rogue.png I'm not sure if we can put up rogue images for approval or not, because of the comments about the blanks and stuff, but some of my characters are rogues, and since the rogue blank is there, I wanted to make Lilystripe an image. I think the shading it too dark, and this is also my first try at the patchy stripes (I tried to make the stripes look sort of like Pounce), so I'm not sure how this turned out. Since no one has commented on Leafburn, I figured I'd put this up. Enough of my rambling on, comments and suggestions? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:47, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good. Just blur the shading some more. Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 14:20, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love Photoshop. Anyway, this better? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:54, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

...Comments? --Icy-chan 23:38, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little more. --Snowfall09 15:22, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's blurred pretty well now, or should be anyway. (to be really random, my new Valentine's Day sig is so lame.� :P) --Icy-chan 23:30, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 22:59, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Forestheart- For Approval Edit

File:Forestheart.warrior.png The fun-loving, cute apprentice-warrior from Featherclans. Comments? Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 14:27, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wooh! First comment! Okay awesome Hawkey he is awesome@ Just darken the ear pink and the ear pink looks crooked. Fix those things and she'll be awesome� :) --PandastormPanda Love 21:46, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Pandastorm, I don't think darkened, lighter. It's more like a hot pink color right now. ( hey, the word hot pink just now reminded me of Barbie dolls!� ;) ) --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Actually, Icestorm's right, dark brown cats have a really dark reddish color of ear pink. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:24, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great Hawkey� :). Just blur the tabby stripes near the neck a bit more and that'll probably be all� :)--♦Christmas-sparrow♦Brighteh XD 16:51, December 24, 2009 (U

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 22:59, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Purplepaw-For Approval Edit

File:Purplepaw.pngUm yeah well, comments?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:36, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm Mousetalon I think you have to wait to be fully join before you add pic to here, but anyway you shoud add ear pink to it and you might need to add a bigger pupil to the eye besides that she looks amazing. I love her pelt markings.-- It's Pebbleshine!!! He he he!!! 06:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I see you added the ear pink, now just make it a darker, more natural color. And the pupil is still pretty small to me. Also, write if you reuploaded this next time. Other than that, it's a great image � :) ♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 20:39, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I could've sworn I typed in Reuploaded before. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 16:22, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the spots more and the eye still needs fixing. This is a very good first try though. SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 22:45, January 24 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did the eye the way we do it on the Warriors wiki. I can't do it any other way. Sorry. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥MothxMouse 20:42, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more redder. Rainwhisker567 02:36, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. ChelseaFC 22:58, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, this is actually declined (see below for the discussion). ChelseaFC 23:09, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Alpinefrost(W)-for approval Edit

File:Alpine.png yah -- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 00:00, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Prettyness! Maybe darken the ear pink to a redish color. WetstarTaylor Swift! 00:13, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Mosspool-For Approval Edit

File:Mosspool.warrior.png Well, my first one on here. Comments? MaplefernHi everyone! 23:51, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and I think you blurred the ear pink too much, I can barely see it. Try darkening it. --Icy-chan 00:19, January 25, 2010 (UTC) �

I echo Icy, and also, thicken the size of the shading as well. It's a little thin for a warrior. Plus, the ear is lopsided, and needs to be centered. Make the white parts on the tail, chest, and paws blend into the fur more, and that would be all� :). Nice job for your fist image! ♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 00:23, January 25, 2010 (UTC) �

I also agree with the others. Blur the shading and the white fur more and I won't mention the ear since Brightsparrow And Icestorm have already mentioned it fully. Pebbleshine was here!! 11:58, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 12:32, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, especially on the tail and back. Rainwhisker567 02:35, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that the ear should be centered and blurred, otherwise I echo Rainwhisker, nice job� :)♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 20:06, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Declined (see below for the discusiion) ChelseaFC 23:05, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Prey-Hunter Blanks - Withdrawing Edit




Now what should these be use for... ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 18:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

These look excellent! Maybe a tribe cat of some sort? To-bes, prey-hunters, and healers have not been taken yet (and I don't think the kit-mothers would be standing up). As for the image, at longer hairs to the tail...make it fluffier I guess (if that is the right word) if you don't understand I'll upload a diagram...19:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)Brightsparrow

Reuploaded. Better? ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 19:28, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better, but look at the hairs on the chest for the long hairs...thats basically what the long hairs tail should be like (excuse me for my bad word choice earlier :P) Brightsparrow 19:32, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 20:09, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Added an example. ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 20:26, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Nice example, but as for the tail, I drew a diagram

Diagram.preyhunterBrightsparrow 22:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 23:34, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I got bored, so I added another example XD ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 23:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Nice examples, but one last thing from me. I think the line art on the ear where the ear pink is supposed to be (thats surrounding it, not the actual ear, but the one in the center) should be erased, since ear pink is meant to be blurred. I just think that because I wouldn't know how to blur the ear pink well if line art like that was surrounding it :P Brightsparrow 19:54, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 20:57, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

These are great! But (always the but... god I hate that word) the lineart looks very... angular. It's a great new way of drawing, but I don't know if you should smooth it or not. And it's quite large :3 Hailshadow

Hmm..... kü§ÅnÅgï 23:57, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

And... yeah, the lines are angular, but that's all, along with the size, that I can see :P Hailshadow 18:46, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

How would I make it less angular? Φτερό 15:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think someone may have posted one of your blanks on devianart, but I'm not so sure. It looks awfully similar, but I just want to make sure before I do anything. See It looks kind of the same, but with some differences. 晶須 00:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Φτερόaεράκι 20:55, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. --IceThe stars will light your path... 23:35, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - for approval Edit

Female Warrior Longhair Me Too!

Yeah, just like Doberdach, I have some blanks I've been holding onto for a while, so here are kittypet blanks. Hope you like 'em! ;) The others are annoyingly not done...... but ugh! these are sooooooo olddddd PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 21:17, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job, Pixieshine :). Just give out the full set of blanks, so we can judge them all, and see which blanks to choose between you and Dober...♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:07, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm freakin' finshed with the males! PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 22:07, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, just post them. Can't wait to see them :). Also, that sounded a little rude with "freakin'" in it, just to let you know....too me it was...I don't know about the rest of you...♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:10, March 8, 2010 (UTC)


I think they look great, Pixie! The only problem is, when I tried to test it out, a thin white line showed up where the lineart was supposed to be, and the color also went into the background for one of might have to find out the source of the problem and redo these....♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:20, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okayyy, yeah, like I said, these are VERY old, so, I'm actually working on the new ones now. ^_^

Ahhhhhh, yeah, I saw the problem, I did it on paint, so I'm going to do it again on PS Elements. PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 22:46, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job, again, and good thing you provided an example :). Now, assuming they are still kittypet blanks, I would add a collar. Other than that, I don't see anything wrong :) ♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 04:30, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thanks! BTW, they are warrior cats, but I can always make kittypets. ^_^ PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 04:32, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

OH. Sorry, I didn't know that. Above it said you were working on kittypet blanks in the first message, so...oh well :). I was wondering why they had sharp, black claws haha. Well I have nothing else to say, but lets hear what others have to say. These are great. ♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 04:54, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! :) YEah, I guess I forgot about the kittypet blanks,and thanks a bunch!!!!! I hope the others enjoy them too! :-D PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 08:04, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I think the white line problem is because you used the soft brush.--DirtfootThe outcast 00:20, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that's usually the case...♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 00:25, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

In case you didn't know, you can click and hold the paintbrush until a little menu pops up, then click on the little pencil for the hard brush. (on Photoshop CS2 atleast...)--DirtfootThe outcast 02:14, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Pixie, I tested it out, and the white line showed up again. I used pixlr to test these out, and you said you used PS elements or something. I think the coloring varies within a site. It may be perfect on one, and not so perfect on another site. You can see where I'm going with this, right? : / ♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 22:55, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I wonder why it does that... maybe its because I have a different computer... who knows? OH, I need to use the pencil tool... okay... well, I'll try that soon. PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 20:40, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think it depends on the paint program....pixlr works well with blanks made from there, but not for a lot of other places....I have no idea what's with it, but I don't think it has to do with the computer....but maybe it could be using the paintbrush instead of the pencil tool....♦Brightsparrow♦Fly Fly Away 03:13, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well, when I use those blanks, I usually use Photoshop CS2 for Windows. But, I get the white line thing when I use them, even on pixlr. I wonder why?--DirtfootThe outcast 03:29, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Here's the link to pixlr: [1]--DirtfootThe outcast 03:23, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

They need collars. And you and Doberdach need to decide who will keep which blank up. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 22:13, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Incase no one's said this yet, there is still a thin white line around it. The problem is, you used a soft brush to make these. You need to use a pencil tool. D= Reese Cups 85 Calories of pure Awesome 13:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Okayyyy. I haven't had the time, and BTW, they are warriors, but its ok. ^_^ I try it with a hard brush... PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 17:41, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Umm... this hasn't been worked on in some time. Please work on this or it will be declined. 晶須 19:58, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in over a month. Should we decline this? 晶須 22:01, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Definitely. A month of doing nothing is bad--Nightshine 00:30, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declining and archiving. 晶須 00:34, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Apprentice Blanks Edit

Once again, I have more blanks! Yay! LOL. Apprentice Female LonghairApprentice Male LonghairApprentice Female ShorthairApprentice Male Shorthair

So they are apprentices. It took me awhile to draw them. But, if you have any comments or problems, just post them below. Thanks! ;) PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 20:38, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! stealthtail {meow!} 11:59, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Part of the tails on the longhairs got cut off. --Icethroat Enter at risk 23:31, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeahhh, sorry. I did it really quickly... I was eating my breakfast. ^^'

Can you draw it back on? --Icethroat Enter at risk 13:02, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, it might take some taime, well even though it appears like it can be fulfilled pretty easily, everything in my life is sort of scrambling... But I'll get to it as soon as possible! =^.^= PixieshineI WUV MEH KITTEHS! 21:18, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I love these! Just close in the eyes, so when we fill in the image (with pixlr) it doesn't fill the eye in. ;) And erase the claws, I don't think there needed. IceSpring is here! 21:29, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The kitties are shocked :3 So should we have that expression, or just a "3" mouth? XD These are really awesome, but I think the eyes are a bit anime-ish... Are we supposed to have anime eyes? Hailshadow 21:48, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think the backs can be less straight-looking :) Brightsparrow 21:54, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Also, can you make these smaller? Brightsparrow 16:26, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, my fault. I took them out of the thumbnail, and tried to set the image to 60 pixels, but then it got even smaller, too small. So... I left it like this. How should we shrink it? Rainwhisker武士貓 00:32, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

You can color the background white and use paint to shrink it, and then, on pixlr, draw over it with another layer. If you don't know what I'm talking about, I can explain it better. ^^' Hailshadow 23:54, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Same as section above: Should we decline these? 晶須 22:01, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Declining and archiving. 晶須 00:37, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Warrior Blanks Edit


I tried to make it ratioed to the adult cat :P Hailshadow 22:52, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Tryl It's Jayfeather o_o

O... I forgot... he's a meddie o_o Then some other blind warrior :P Hailshadow 23:01, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Randomit Another random. Hailshadow 23:09, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

WhitestormI should really stop. Hailshadow 23:14, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think there's enough examples now. :) For the blanks, thicken the lineart, the front left legs look flat and 2D, and the haunches look a bit fat. Also, the right eye should be as big as the left eye, and the curve transition in the tail on the shorthairs looks like a bend in the tail, and it needs to be a smooth circular transition. --Icethroat Enter at risk 01:16, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ice, plus for the right paw (our right), even out the top part, so it doesn't turn inlcine down....if you're having trouble with understanding me, I can make a diagram. Also, make the left (our left) eye easier to color. But these are excellent! Brightsparrow 01:37, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hailshadowtrial Is this better? XD and a diagram would be awesome, Brighteh (yush, I'm lazy... I say Brighteh). Hailshadow 21:40, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

No problem :)

Hailshadowtrial.diagramsee, make the paw more even, so it doesn't turn down :) Brightsparrow 21:59, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Also, I'm sorry Hail, but when I tried to color it in, this is what happened:


you might need to find the source of the problem with the eye and the background...weird, it looked fine in the examples :P Brightsparrow 22:04, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Righto! XD Hailshadow 22:08, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Updated, but I think that it should be turned our left, because the cat's sitting and turning :0 Hailshadow 22:13, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, well I just thought that since the leg was straight...looked like it was in a forward position :P Brightsparrow 22:18, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Loleth :3 Well I tried to make it curved now... how's the paint problem going? :/ it's fine with mine. Hailshadow 22:22, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

It's still going into the background D:. You might need to look extremely close at he image, and zoom in, and find a gap...usually, it's a slightly transparent, but not too much. It usually worksBrightsparrow 00:42, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

I made it in paint though, and when I used the paint tool, it ended like 1try1 0.o tomato kitty Hailshadow 19:50, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Strange, because it doesn't work with pixlr :P. i wonder whats wrong... Brightsparrow 02:59, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr had an upgrade thingy, so if the pixels are like this: Pixelexample

then the color goes right through. So you might have to thicken the lineart for the warrior blanks so the color doesn't go through. Does anyone get what I'm saying? --Rainwhisker 14:02, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, I certainly get what you are saying.^^ Ruinpaw I was trapped like a mouse in TwolegPlace... 14:50, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh that stinks :P. Upgrades.....ugh. Well just fix that, evening, and I think the color problem will be resolved :P Brightsparrow 16:12, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, I got what you're saying, Rain XD Hopefully I've fixed it. ( Please look back to the first pictures, I uploaded new ones) Hailshadow 15:35, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Aomwxat Exammple with new ones Hailshadow

Much can color easily on pixlr now. I just had a little trouble coloring the left (our left) eye. Maybe find a way to make it easier? Brightsparrow 20:28, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I can't seem to get the eye right :P Can you try drawing a diagram o_o Hailshadow

Brighteh? Hailshadow 18:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry that took long, it was a little hard for me :P. Basically, it's a piece of lineart thicker....I added lineart about that thickness, and you just need to erase the lineart inside when maybe layering it or in on gimp or pixlr for a better view of it...if you don't get it, I'll try to explain it in a simpler way...if thats possible)


Brightsparrow 02:38, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

No, I get what you're saying :3 But they look quite fine to me... could we have more people to contradict, please? Hailshadow 18:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart, and remove the lineart that closes the front paw facing us. --IceThe stars will light your path... 23:43, April 24, 2010 (UTC) Lengthen the back paws. Thin out the tail a bit.--Nightshine 23:59, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it'll be declined. 晶須 19:53, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

If these blanks are declined, I'll take them over. They are good and I don't want to waste them. :) I really, really like these blanks. Γǻώήςτόŗm 10:02, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Fawnstorm! These are yours now. 晶須 23:28, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Great. Start all the comments again please. I'll try my best! :3 Γǻώήςτόŗm 11:47, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'll start a new section, I'll start again. :) Γǻώήςτόŗm 12:12, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Achiving. --晶須 21:33, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

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